I don't have anything to teach today. It's a sunny, beautiful day in Kansas, but I really don't feel the heat. I'm mellowed out and ready to hit up the weekend with the million plot bunnies bouncing around in my head. Duuude, I'm switching this blog today. No more lessons, you guys go learn on your own; the only thing I'll teach you are my stories and poems. I need to start building a fan-base anyway...bleh.
Here's a poem I wrote a while ago, it implies something, I'm sure you'll figure it out; but hey, don't judge, I don't do it so I wouldn't know if this is what it feels like. I just wrote.
Stardust
She holds a breath in
Keeping the stardust trapped in her lungs
Rappid flow of stars accross
Her eyelids
And she lets it go with a whisper
The stardust whithers and whiters
And then it's gone
Songs swell in its place
Melodies enchanting
Promising
Golden years to come
And then it's gone
And tears swell in its place
Sparkling dropets
Full of her life
Told in rain
Only the memories remain
The hit just brought on more pain
Colors fade
Facade is back in its place
She reaches for the another hit
And holds the stardust in.
I love this. I absolutely love this. This is one of the best poems I've heard from you. Can't wait to read more. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Emma :D I'm trying to get off my rhyming horse XD you'll probably see a bunch of freeverse-ish poems : ]
ReplyDeleteok, since i couldnt really post comments before i shall make up for that : 1. I LOVE hitting people with foam swords. although i usually use wood.
ReplyDeleteand 2. You go to anime conventions too? sweet.
and now for this one 3. judging by the chan and your convention time I take it you like japanese so ja, mata karasu de. sutsure shimasu.
It's great that you can make me laugh and want to know more all at the same time :)
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed lessons, but love the poetry. I also love the idea of "plot bunnies" jumping around! Fun. But also, could be annoying.
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